Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team that believe no one should practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
2. To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project - the ones doing the experiment - to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
1. Darnel doesn't have any reason to question the instructions, but he wants an explanation for his exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
1. Olga and I went downtown and bought new notebooks for class and for our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
2. The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us memebers
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
1. You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, It'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
1. The rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned it to us.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Neither Ben nor I knew the definition of the word "Chide" because we have not read the assignment.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
2. The race among the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electrion lasers will change the wolrd as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
1.Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
2. I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
1. My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
1. Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
2. There were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
1. "I reviewed the book well and, I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away. Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
2. Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
1. You should have followed the three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
2. Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
1. Does Caroline know whether Raul have come to the calls council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was off student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
2. There are three qualities that give this this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
2. After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the east side of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," stated Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
1. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican. Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it was all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
2. They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
1. Follow some simple rules and you will succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team that believe no one should practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
2. To ensure success, the teachers should require those in the project - the ones doing the experiment - to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
1. Darnel doesn't have any reason to question the instructions, but he wants an explanation for his exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
1. Olga and I went downtown and bought new notebooks for class and for our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
2. The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered most of us memebers
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
1. You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, It'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
1. The rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned it to us.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Neither Ben nor I knew the definition of the word "Chide" because we have not read the assignment.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
2. The race among the three relay teams is close; however, none of the three is giving up the hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time free-electrion lasers will change the wolrd as much as the invention of electricity."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
2. Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
1.Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South, with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
2. I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
1. My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
1. Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
2. There were too many things to do: I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
1. "I reviewed the book well and, I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
2. Bob says that regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
1. You should have followed the three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
2. Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
1. Does Caroline know whether Raul have come to the calls council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was off student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
2. There are three qualities that give this this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
2. After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club on the east side of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," stated Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
1. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it was all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
2. They mentioned that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
1. Follow some simple rules and you will succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be made more challenging," Martina stated.